My blog posts compared to Ashley Dosanjh are poorly done. I should write with more detail and with more goals. Looking at her blog I can tell that she writes about her obstacles and how she overcame the obstacles. Ashley also writes about who she should be with because if your with somebody that doesn't try it will rub off on her. In my blog I should write more about how to accomplish the goals and not if I did accomplish it or not. In her blog she also writes about how her body is changing as she is sprinting and during the break. After reading and analyzing Ashely's blog I understand what I should improve and who I should join for an activity.
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